­
Skip to main content

Destiny

The war was almost won.  A few of Marwar’s soldiers were left on the field along with Rao Maldeo Singh Rathore, their king and leader.  He was thinking of retreating at the end of this day. As his sword clashed with one of the opponent generals as he eyed the opponent King now open and prone to attack. A little hope flickered in his mind as his eyes instructed his closest aide.  The opponent was quite in a winning situation thanks to their new Senapati. He was just 16 yet his bravery and valour reflected his blood and upbringing. He mesmerised the opponents and even Rao Maldeo with his clever war strategies and sword skills.

As Maldeo’s aide swung his sword at a taken aback Udai Singh, someone’s sword defended it as his body acted like a shield for the king. He killed the man in one go.
“ Ranaji are you okay?”
“ Haan Raoji.” He nodded gratefully. 
By half the day, the Marwar army had retreated as the air filled with “ Jai Mewar! Jai Eklingji!” From the triumphant soldiers.

Rana Udai Singh stood addressing the tired, wounded yet happy cavalry.
“Today we have defeated one of our strongest contenders. We are proud of what Eklingji has gifted us. And we are proud to serve and contribute to our Motherland. As a servant of EklingNath Ji today I am proud.”
“ Rana Udai Singh Ji ki jai.” A roar broke out as he stopped the crowd with his hand.
“Today I want to use this opportunity to thank some of the people without whom this victory was impossible. Mewar will always remember you proudly. First my very close aide and friend, Rawat KrishnaDas ChundawatJi.”  A tall strong man came up on the dais and Udai Singh hugged him smiling. He was grateful to this man not only for his service to the kingdom but also for his sons. Udai Singh at times failed to understand his own blood the way Rawatji understood and handled them. He was ever grateful to him because he was the father figure of both the eldest princess.
“ Next I want to thank the person who saved my life today, Without you, we would have lost this war. Rao RamRakh Punwar. Ayiye.”
“ Ranaji It is our duty towards Mewar to protect you, You don’t need to thank us for our Dharm. We owe our lives to Mewar.”
“ I never saw this man before.” A young man was telling another in the crowd.
“He is from Bijolia, he joined us with the army the day before yesterday. Bijolia is nearby from here so ….” Another young man was explaining.
“ You know so much about everyone, Dadabhai, wah.”
“ It's my duty as a Senapati  to know the chieftains Bhai.”
“ Yes, after all, you are the future King.”
“That’s not the case Shakti, If you want to know, you are eager to learn you also can….”
“ I just want to go back home and live in peace in Chittorgarh, Ranima’s Modak is waiting for me there.”

“ Now the last person who deserves a mention. It’s a moment of joy as a king but as a father, I couldn’t be prouder.”
“ Baojiraj Pratap Ki Jai. Baojiraj Pratap ki Jai” 
The crowd cheered as he walked up to his father teary-eyed. Today he made his father proud. He felt a little uneasy at praises usually but not today. He was so happy as his father hugged him. Kunwar Pratap Singh was a true warrior by the looks of it. His Kesar tilak shone brightly as the sun of the Raghu clan and his eyes reflected intelligence. The bruises he got from the wars and enemies, he flaunted with pride, he looked into the eyes of death for his motherland without a blink.

After a day the camp was ready to move. Everyone was bidding farewell after the war and Kunwar Pratap and Kunwar Shakti were very happy to go home but Udai Singh called them to his tent.
“ I am leaving for Eklingji from here. Your Ranima will meet me there for the Havan to show Gratitude for the win. Kunwar Pratap you take the army and your brother back to Chittor.”
“ I want to go too, Dajiraj,” Pratap said eagerly.
“ No Kunwar Pratap. Your wounds need rest and healing. You are not that tough yet, you need Rajvaidji’s care. So go home.”
“ Jo Hukum” He folded his hands before leaving with Shakti.

Some 16 years ago, in Mewar….
On the month of Jyestha Sudi on the third day of Vikram Era 1597, Sunday at 47 Ghati 13 Pal past sunrise Maharani Jaivanta Bai’s Labour room was filled with happy voices of the ladies present there. The smiles were surpassed by a Child’s cry. This year was really auspicious for Udai Singh. He had won back his home from his uncle now, the first prince was being born to the seventeen-year-old Jalore Songara Queen. On the Ardra Nakshatra, his birth was considered not only auspicious but the astrologers also made the prediction that the child will bring shining glory to the name of the clan. Thus the heir to the throne was born.
“ Pratap.” Was the suggestion in unison from the royal couple as they smiled at each other holding the Baby as the Rajpurohit suggested “ p” for the name.
“He will win overall, he will defeat death and bring glory to the clan.”
The Rajpurohit had repeated again and again. “He will be the one people remember this clan for." Jaivanta took these predictions as a task in hand, after all, a baby was like wet clay. The mother’s task was to shape him up for the future. He was her responsibility. Rarely did she agree with her husband’s principles and she had the task to make her son live with hers.

Two Years and a few months hence,

It was autumn, and the chills of the winter were already setting in. It was the month of Kartik, the warrior god. The Mahal in Bijolia was gloomy. The Vaids, Daima and nurses along with several other women were in the labour room of Hansa Bai Punwar who was now at risk. The baby had slipped prematurely and was in an awkward position in the womb. Both mother and child were at risk as the vaids informed a tensed Ram Rakh Punwar. He had clearly made his decision. He had chosen to save his wife over the unborn daughter. If it was a son he would have given it a thought, but this was no heir. Not that he didn’t love Hansa but having a successor was always more important than … The Vaid interrupted his thoughts.

“ Raoji, it’s a miracle… If I was not present here I wouldn’t have believed this …”
“ Is Hansa all right?”
“ She is fine, Raoji. And your daughter too. She is a born fighter. The way she fought to live was amazing! I couldn’t believe she beat the odds, ``Congratulations Raoji, you have a Mata Laxmi at home now.” He smiled.
The astrologers were astonished at her birth, she was indeed born a fighter. They predicted whoever she was with would never lose a war. He would be undefeated in life. She is indeed Laxmi for whoever she connects with. Hansa was happy with her daughter. She would, at last, have a friend. 
When the astrologers suggested “A” for her, Hansa decided to give her daughter a unique name. 
“ Ajab Deh.” She whispered happily to the baby who smiled.
“ Unique Body?” Ramrakh frowned.
“Unique soul.” Hansa smiled, promising to give her all the happiness in the world. “ My Unique Soul.”

The statue of the Lord stood tall in the Puja Ghar. The diyas were being lit one by one as dusk set in.
“ Baisa let me do it.” A Daasi urged
“ No Rama, let me do it, it’s not something tough is it?” She held a Diya in hand, lighting another with it, she moved around the room, lighting all the diyas one by one then proceeded to the hallway, then to the rooms. The daasi followed silently. Soon before darkness set in she had lit up the entire Mahal. She smiled and kept down the last diya on her study table.
“ Now I will be alone with the Ramayana Rama, thank you so much.” She smiled and let the daasi go.
“ Sita was always loved and cherished as Laxmi by her father. She was the fortune every man wanted. Prince Rama was…” She stopped as she looked up at the door, a little boy about five entered.
“ Can you tell me the story too, Jija?”
“ Come here, Balwant.” She patted the place beside her.
“ Tell me Jija. How was Prince Ram?”
“ Maryada Purushottam, he always respected and treated Sita as equal, he loved his parents and siblings, elders' orders were his Dharm, he was a perfect warrior, King and husband.”
“ Why so?”
“ He treated his subjects like his children, he fought without a fear for his life, he loved Sita like she was his world.” She stopped.
“ Is there anyone like that today?” Balwant asked.
“ I don’t know. I don’t think there is. All the kings today are very political. They are brave but they all fear death. I haven’t heard of a person who doesn’t fear death, Bhai.”
“ Ajabde!” Her mother’s voice interrupted them, “ Your Father is home, help me make dinner.”
“ Daata!” Balwant ran eagerly to see his father.
“ The war was almost lost, we lost hope, but the way Baojiraj motivated and guided us, he is so small in age but so skilful at war. It’s like he doesn’t fear death.” Ajabde’s hand stopped giving Balwant the daal as he smiled at his Jija.
“ So he is like Lord Ram,” Balwant spoke up as everyone smiled.

Maharani Jaivanta Bai’s Carriage stopped at the temple complex. She got out, in a maroon and yellow lehenga as two daasis came with the puja thali and daala. Jaivanta took the thaal and was about to light the diya. Rajpurohit stopped her.
“ Wait till Ranaji is here Ranisa. If the Diya flickers out then that’s an ill omen.”
“ He is here Rajpurohit Ji.” She replied calmly from behind her veil. Rajpurohit frowned, he was not in sight.
“Rana Udai Singh Ji ki jai!” A cheer was heard from the gates as he walked barefooted and hands folded in the Eklingji Temple complex.
“ Adbhut!” Rajpurohit exclaimed. “ How can you tell whenever Ranaji or Baojiraj is nearby…”
“ Gani Khamma Rajpurohit ji.” Udai Singh addressed the man. “ Chaliye.” The three of them walked barefoot into the temple for the Havan.

After the havan, Jaivanta Bai was giving away Prasad to the poor. Her heart still had a lot of questions. Udai Singh walked up to her and said, “ I know you have a lot of questions in your head right now. I have sent Pratap and Shakti back to Chittor, they were injured and…”
“ I want to go to Bijolia.”
“ Bijolia? But why?” Udai was shocked at her request.
“ There is a Sambhu Parvati temple there I want to visit before going home, Ranaji. I want to thank Maata Parvati.”
“ All Right, then we must leave immediately to reach there by Dusk.”

“ Ranisa Ranisa Baojiraaj is here, along with Kunwar Shakti and the rest of the Sena “
“ Really? My Shakti is here!” Sajja Bai ran through the corridor of the Rani Mahal to the smallest room at one end.
“ Veer Behna!” The call made the young woman skip a heartbeat. Was it bad news? She felt guilty enough that her stupidity had caused an ego clash between kings. Kunwar Pratap had always reminded her, “ It’s all about fate and destiny “ He was the sole friend she had here.
 “ Ji Majhli Ranisa?” She hurried to the door.
“ Come quickly, Kunwar Pratap is home with Kunwar Shakti and the others. They were victorious. Did someone tell his Choti Maa?” Sajja asked the daasi.
“ Yes Jija, they did, I will do Kunwar Pratap’s aarti.”
The palace entrance was decorated with a path of marigold petals for the Prince. He humbly folded his hands at the cheering crowd. He walked up the five steps to his Choti Maa who happily did his aarti. Sajja hugged Shakti much to his annoyance. 

“ Ranaji, it’s our pleasure to have you and Maharanisa in Bijolia. I have a small request for you Hukum.” Raoji had rushed to the temple the moment he heard of the King’s arrival.
“ Raoji, you have saved my life. I owe you. Tell without fear.” Rana Udai Singh smiled.
“ I know my Mahal is very small, but I would like to have you there at least for a day, as guests, Hukum. It will be my….”
“ Only a day Raoji? I was thinking of two!” Udai Singh frowned as Rao Ramrakh got scared.
“ Hukum, I didn’t mean…”                                                                    
“Ohho Raoji I know I know. Chaliye.” Rana Udai Singh laughed, patting his Samant’s back as Jaivanta Bai followed.
“ Kya? They are staying in Bijolia?” Kunwar Pratap was clearly displeased by the news. He wanted to see his Ranima and here she wrote to Majhli Maa that she is staying there for two-three days at Ramrakh Ji's request. Kunwar Pratap shook his head and left for the Dangalsthal, angry.




Popular Posts

Longing of the Heart

  Kunwar Partap had woken up in the darkest hour of the night, taken his bath and made his way to the Mahakal temple complex. It was relatively empty at that hour of the day, just before dawn, as the birds chirped around them and the sky looked a little grey with rain clouds. He looked up noticing the clouds pass by slowly, praying for a good amount of rain that year that would help the farmers. He approached the temple, walking across the premises near the Mandakini Kund, and found the old royal priest lighting the lamp on the feet of the Lord. Watching him approach the man smiled as he took his blessings and the priest left him to pray. He wondered if she was around the moment he finished his prayers and walked out to the main premises. He smiled slightly remembering how the embarrassed princess did not show herself in front of him for the rest of the day after she complained about the sweets. He was glad at her informality even when she feared otherwise. Kunwar Partap saw a few ...

Mystique of Fate

Ajbante Kanwar was standing on the balustrade of her room, looking over the horizon. It was midnight and a veil of stars covered the sky twinkling like precious diamonds. She had just blown out her lamp after reading for a while. She had quietly stepped out on the balustrade, her hair free and dancing in the gentle breeze, her heavy jewellery and lehenga abandoned for the day and she had a calm smile on her face as she lifted her eyes to watch the stars. She reminisced about the day while she stood there with a coy smile on her face.  Kunwar Partap had taken an interest in teaching Akhil and Balwant some basic skills that would help them defeat the enemy. While Akhil who went to Gurukul had a proper sword, Balwant who was now five, used a wooden sword but was adamant to learn. They had followed Kunwar Partap to the arena when he talked about sword practice during a meal. Rao Ramrakh resisted their idea but Kunwar Partap insisted he was happy to teach them. He eyed the veiled face s...

My Everything

Kunwar Pratap stormed into the Mahal at Gogunda. Happy faces of the chieftains and soldiers welcomed him as Rao Ramrakh and Rawatji stopped the ongoing Raj tilak. A visibly scared Kunwar Jagmal looked clueless at a visibly angry Kunwar Pratap. Rani Dheerbai Bhattiyani hadn't expected this son of Mewar to show up that too twenty-one days after his father's death. He was not informed as per Dheerbai's instructions. She looked at Rawat Ji. He must have gone to Raoji at Bijolia. No one except them knew where Kunwar Pratap was staying. It was for the safety of his family. " What are you doing Chotima?" A disappointed voice came. She could stoop down so low? " We were about to inform you..." She spoke up in her defence. " When Dheerbai ji?" Maharani Jaivanta Bai, clad in white entered the hall as people bowed before her. " After your son's coronation?" " I did nothing Badima I swear!" A low voice came from Jagmal. " Maha...

Broken Strings

“Kunwarsa Padhare Hai.” The attendant ran across the corridor of the Bijoliya Palace conveying the news.  Rao Ramrakh had politely asked the prince of Mewar to wait by the Bijoliya Lake for half a day, as he arrived back home at dawn to see to the preparations of welcoming the prince of Mewar properly. Ajbante Kanwar was present when he led his troops back home at dawn and she had handed her mother the Aarti Thaal for his welcome. As she stood back, watching her mother do his aarti, smiling relieved at his injured and tired face, and her father reassuring her of his well-being, for the first time Ajbante Kanwar also noticed his other wives, standing behind her mother, dressed up, equally happy at his arrival, eagerly waiting for their turns to greet him. It did not escape her keen observation that some of her stepmothers looked mildly disappointed when he ordered her mother to come by his bed chambers with the balms from the Vaid and ordered her to see to the preparations for the w...

Towards You

Kunwar Pratap and Ajabde were friends. He didn't feel awkward sharing his plans and thoughts with her anymore. She was more than happy to advise him on everything. She was happy he listened to her advice before taking or discarding them, be it on what to wear to Padmavati's Sagai or how to befriend the revolting Bhils. He loved the way Ajabde always used metaphors from Puranas and Ramayanas to explain the toughest things so easily. She expressed herself so well, so easily that it amazed him.   The Afghans were now led by Mehmood Shah. They have made secret territories in the forests and waited to attack. Rawatji and his spies had confirmed the news and Udai Singh had warned Mehmood Shah to withdraw his troops from Mewar in vain. Now, it was time they declared war. Mehmood Shah had limited resources in Mewar. And his spies clearly suggested that in no way could he win, especially with Kunwar Pratap leading his troops. He was having second thoughts about the war. One of his aides...

Scrutiny of His Keen Eyes

Rao Ramrakh Punwar had walked into the camp tent upon the declaration of his arrival and bowed to the Rana of Mewar. Rana Udai Singh was sitting on a makeshift throne inside the tent with a spread of fresh fruits, wine and nuts on the carpet before him. He gestured at Rao Ramrakh as one of the servants offered him grapes that he politely refused. He eyed Rawat Chundawat, standing by the king, his hands folded across his chest, his face looking worried, the bushy brows narrowed and his long oiled and combed beard looking neat as he eyed Rao Ramrakh. Almost as if he could read his mind, the Samanth of Bijoliya knew that like himself the Rawat of Salumber did not quite agree to the need of this battle. Yet here they were. Rao Ramrakh realised they were probably waiting for the Senapati, Kunwar Partap as some soldiers came and spread some maps of the terrain as instructed by Rawat Chundawat. The guards declared the arrival of the prince of Bundi as Rana stood up to welcome his son-in-law. ...

Protectors

Rao Surtan was at the Palace gates as the soldiers tried in vain to attack with arrows. His army was stronger and more competent than the one Balwant headed at the Bijolia Fort Gates. “Break the door” he ordered. “Where is Ajabde?” Hansa looked around the cellar. “Jija!” Ratan exclaimed. “She was on the roof last I saw.” “Ajabde.” Hansa Bai opened the cellar door and stepped out followed by Ratan who was equally worried. “Stay back!” Sajja Bai called in vain as Jaivanta Bai too walked out and up the stairs to the corridors of the Ranimahal in search of Ajabde.  Meanwhile, Surtan’s army had entered the palace and he made his way to the Ranimahal. He was having different thoughts now. Killing Jaivanta Bai won't yield him anything… Maybe capturing a few young maidens… Ratan froze in the corridor seeing the man approach. Behind her were her mother and Jaivanta Bai with the same reaction. “ Jee Bavro ho gayo!” Surtan Singh took out his sword. Ratan took two ste...

Survival

Ye woh dandal hai ke jisse Tu nikalega mujhko Tu hi rakshak Tu hi sathi mera. "Pishima." Prabhavati applied oil on Sadhana Debi's knees as she spoke "I was wondering, now that the Bouma is here to take care of the house, the Roy Chowdhury mansion will no longer miss Didi." She smiled faintly "After her, things would fall apart… if not for Trilochan da…" Sadhana shook her head. "It's been two days. Don't even compare them to Shubhra." She almost snapped. "Especially that girl." Prabhavati looked up. "She acts like she has been caged. She is always interested more in the outside world of men. That's not a good sign." She shook her head. "There is a saying, Khay day Pakhiti boner dike Akhiti ." Sadhana fussed "She is like that." Prabhavati smiled silently. "Mejo Bouma is educated too, isn't she?" Sadhana looked suspicious. "I bet she will also be pushed to it. You know my mo...

In Love??

Ajabde was bedridden over the next few weeks. She was too weak to sit up or do things on her own and the medicine men insisted she needed complete rest to heal. Kunwar Pratap insisted on staying by her side which Ajabde firmly refused. She didn't want to be a distraction from his work. That would break her vow, she said. Kunwar Pratap just smiled knowing she was so adamant and how smartly she convinced people. Ajabde was never bored though! The Queens and Princesses constantly came to check on her and keep her company. All except Dheerbai who only came once, when Ranaji visited her. Ajabde was getting better each day as the Vaid came to check on her and suggested it was time she could start leading a normal life again. Her wound still hurt a little and sometimes she felt dizzy due to the weakness but the Vaid said that too would go in two or three days. Ajabde was a fighter. Jaivanta Bai was proud when the Vaid said that Kunwaranisa had the strongest willpower he had ever seen.   K...

Prologue: Impulsive Hearts

1576 CE. The dark clouds circled over the Haveli of the Chieftain at Avadgadh, one of the unimportant posts on the western borders of Mewar, Rajputana. It was the arrival of the rainy season, with occasional downpours over the green veil of the Aravallis on the horizon and the streams that often meandered around the hills now surged like rivers. The monotonous life in the little settlement was stirred by the arrival of guests in the Haveli. It was not usual for the old chieftain to receive so many guests, especially women and it sparked curiosity and rumours among the villagers. Who were these people? Some of them looked like royal ladies and some not. In the inner palace of Avadgadh, on a balustrade that was designed with Jali, nymphs adorning its pillars that looked over the Aravallis in a distance, covered with dark clouds, the gusty wind blew the new curtains almost toppling a vase kept by the window. She caught it, alarmed, almost out of the force of habit to be alert about her su...